Wednesday, November 14, 2007

Annotated Bibliography feedback

So I just got back my reviews, and I did alright, but that isn't great. I mostly had "good and satisfactory" comments. Things that I still have to correct are small grammar mistakes, organization, and adding a sixth source. I didn't add the sixth because I plan to have it be an interview with someone going through the immigration process, which will greatly help my essay.
Things to fix for final bibliography;
grammar
better category titles
6th source

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